Monday, July 18, 2011

How do you like my character?

Ha ha she's probably a borderline sue you took that test too? Same here. You probably read my question too cause I see the same line I used they abuse her mentally and physically in my paragraph ha ha but she seems pretty solid but her stories a bit too tramatic try to add some good times so its not a totally depressing story cause you just have to try a lot harder to keep the readers reading because they don't want to be depressed the whole entire story.

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